Mom’s Red Coat

Summary


Mom's Red Coat is a tender short story about a child facing their mother's absence for the first time. When Mom leaves for a new job during the week, she leaves behind her beloved red coat as a reminder of her love. The coat becomes a picnic blanket, a garden scarecrow, and a bedtime cover — gathering paint, juice, mud, and crumbs along the way. Through each messy, loving moment, the child discovers that connection can live in the smallest, most familiar things.


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I love Mom’s coat!
It’s red and long and warm. And it smells like Mom!

I love doing things with Mom!

We picnic outside.
We work in the garden.
She hugs me when I come home from school.
At night, she holds me tight until I fall asleep.

‘Good news!’ says Mom.

‘I found a job! I will be away all week, but I’ll come home on weekends!’

‘Who will hold me at night, Mom?’

‘Who will hug me, picnic with me, garden with me?’

‘I can see that you are sad. I will leave my red coat here with you.’

‘When you see it, remember that I love you, and I’m coming back.’

I drag the red coat outside – it’s my picnic blanket!

It feels like Mom is with me.

Oops! Juice spill!

I am sad that Mom’s not waiting at the door when I come home.

I put on her coat.

It’s warm and it smells like her. It feels like a hug!

Oops! Paint!

I help Gogo in the garden.

The long coat on the branch scares away the chickens!

It feels like Mom is gardening with us.

Oops! Mud!

When it’s dark, I miss Mom most.

Gogo covers me with her warm coat.

It feels like Mom is holding me as I fall asleep.

Oops! Cookie crumbs!

Mom’s red coat is warm and smells like…

Paint, juice, mud, and cookie crumbs!

Oops! We need to wash it!

The wind blows the red coat off the washing line…

Up into the air!
It flies over the fence!
It flies over the taxi!

Oops! Who did the coat fall on?

I run and grab it!

‘Found you, coat!’
The red coat smells like Mom again.

‘Oh!’ ‘Found you, Mom! You’re back!’

Credits

Originally published by Book Dash under a Creative Commons Licensed BY 4.0. This book can be read for free on https://bookdash.org/books/moms-red-coat and was created by: Chrissie Kritzinger (Writer), Meerashen Naidoo (Designer), Zanri Kritzinger (Editor), Brad Cuzen (Illustrator) Book Dash logo